Thank you so much. Your comment made me go re-read the story, because it was a struggle. I'd started it once and hated it and completely started over. I hadn't re-read this version since I wrote it. I have to say I'm relieved. I'm glad I didn't leave the original as was.

Why didn't you write one for Snowflake? It sounds like a good idea to me. I got lucky that I had another project that I hadn't started so my project for Snowflake killed two birds with one stone. :-)