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ysabetwordsmith ([personal profile] ysabetwordsmith) wrote in [community profile] allbingo 2014-04-07 12:04 am (UTC)

Re: Yay!

>> Hey, just wanted to say those exercises are great. <<

Yay! Thanks for the feedback.

>> I did the nature poem exercise first. I don't write detailed descriptions of settings and I thought I wouldn't be able to write a nature poem, though I had chosen an easy setting. But I followed each step and I was surprised by how much I knew about the setting. <<

I'm so happy to hear that. I like encouraging people.

>> The poem I came up with is not that great so now I'm editing it. I just wanted to say, thank you! :) <<

You'll get better with practice, and yes, poems often benefit from revision.

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